Please tone down the Ivy League writing. It's so long-winded that it is unintelligible to 90% of most people. I'm 59, went to college, have taken legal classes and I really had to push myself to keep reading this without a thesaurus. I get the gist of what you're saying, but do it in a way that compels people to actually want to read it. The key to persuasive speech and writing is to persuade. If they can't understand what the hell they're reading, they eventually stop reading, thus nullifying all of your efforts, which IMO isn't very persuasive. Just my two cents, for whatever that's worth. Keep up the good fight and remember the KISS principle when persuading the masses.
Thomas Paine would be following your writings. Sorry that our people have to go thru this time. We The People shall overcome this but, not without a great deal more pain. We are all about to get and object lesson in biblical terms not seen since Pentecost in the first century A.D. It is God's domain to set up or tear down nations. Usually happens we leaders lead people away from God. It never ended well for the people. The level of infiltration and subversion we currently living with was designed and planned to tempt God's wrath on this nation...
Please tone down the Ivy League writing. It's so long-winded that it is unintelligible to 90% of most people. I'm 59, went to college, have taken legal classes and I really had to push myself to keep reading this without a thesaurus. I get the gist of what you're saying, but do it in a way that compels people to actually want to read it. The key to persuasive speech and writing is to persuade. If they can't understand what the hell they're reading, they eventually stop reading, thus nullifying all of your efforts, which IMO isn't very persuasive. Just my two cents, for whatever that's worth. Keep up the good fight and remember the KISS principle when persuading the masses.
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Thomas Paine would be following your writings. Sorry that our people have to go thru this time. We The People shall overcome this but, not without a great deal more pain. We are all about to get and object lesson in biblical terms not seen since Pentecost in the first century A.D. It is God's domain to set up or tear down nations. Usually happens we leaders lead people away from God. It never ended well for the people. The level of infiltration and subversion we currently living with was designed and planned to tempt God's wrath on this nation...