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Charles Hunch's avatar

Please tone down the Ivy League writing. It's so long-winded that it is unintelligible to 90% of most people. I'm 59, went to college, have taken legal classes and I really had to push myself to keep reading this without a thesaurus. I get the gist of what you're saying, but do it in a way that compels people to actually want to read it. The key to persuasive speech and writing is to persuade. If they can't understand what the hell they're reading, they eventually stop reading, thus nullifying all of your efforts, which IMO isn't very persuasive. Just my two cents, for whatever that's worth. Keep up the good fight and remember the KISS principle when persuading the masses.

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Dr. James R. Lucas's avatar

One of the best and deepest analysts of our current political situation.

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